Imagine you're skimming the news and come across a story entitled "Democrats Work to Smooth Iraq Tension." What would you assume the article was about? That those caring Dems had tried to ease sectarian strife between Sunnis and Shias, perhaps? I'd say that would be a fair inference. But read the story, and you'll discover that it is an account of a behind-closed-doors shouting match between Nancy Pelosi and Maxine Waters, the tart-tongued congresswoman from California.
According to the body of the article, "tempers flared on Iraq among Democrats on Tuesday as House Speaker Nancy Pelosi fielded criticism from an anti-war congresswoman over liberals' concern that the party is not doing enough to end the war. Pelosi's behind-closed-doors exchange with Rep. Maxine Waters of California [was] described as heated."
What's the harm, you might ask? After all, the full story is there for those who read it. But that's just the point. Frequently people read only the headlines. Consider, for example, this excerpt from a writer's guide:
"In search engines, newsfeeds (RSS), and other external environments . . . users often see only the headline and use it to determine whether to click into the full posting. Even if users see a short abstract along with the headline (as with most search engines), user testing shows that people often read only the headline. In fact, people often read only the first three or four words of a headline when scanning a list of possible places to go.
It's a news adage that conflict sells. So which headline is likely to attract more readers: one that suggests that tensions are being smoothed out, as in the AP's version, or one that told the real story: "Dem Tempers Flare Behind Closed Doors"?
You don't suppose the AP was trying to do their friends in the DNC a little favor by portraying Dems as peacemakers rather than infighters, do you?
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—Mark Finkelstein is a NewsBusters contributing editor and host of Right Angle. Contact him at mark@gunhill.net.



















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Mark, how about this for the more appropriate Headline...
March 15, 2007 - 07:35 ET by acaiguanaMark, how about this for the more appropriate Headline.
"CIVIL WAR IN DEMOCRAT PARTY DETRACTS FROM AGENDA"
ACA
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Quoted from: 'Acaiguana Notes from the Bomb Shelter' (soon to be a movie at theaters near you)
I'll submit to AP and see i
March 15, 2007 - 07:42 ET by Mark FinkelsteinI'll submit to AP and see if they'll substitute it ;-)
Too-long. Mark's absolutely
March 15, 2007 - 07:42 ET by sarcasmoToo-long. Mark's absolutely right, conflict sells & people these days don't read (or comprehend...) too-well. Your ideal headline is the simplest, shortest possible way of accurately telling what the story is about while at the same time grabbing all possible eyeballs. I'd nominate just: "SHOUTING MATCH!". (And IMO Drudge is today's reigning master of headline-writing.)
JMR
OK, sarc, how about this? ACA
March 15, 2007 - 07:56 ET by acaiguanaOK, sarc, how about this? ACA
"CIVIL WAR KILLS DEMOCRATIC AGENDA"
:-)
ACA
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Quoted from: 'Acaiguana Notes from the Bomb Shelter' (soon to be a movie at theaters near you)
Still too-long for me (you'
March 15, 2007 - 08:00 ET by sarcasmoStill too-long for me (you're assuming a literate audience for your headlines, instead of an audience that literally feels informed if they manage to partially-read headlines while they ignore any actual content).
JMR
Well, at that point, why print the article at all?
March 15, 2007 - 08:07 ET by acaiguanaWell, at that point, why print the article at all?
Might just as well print one-two word headlines. Oh well, I give up.
:-)
ACA
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Quoted from: 'Acaiguana Notes from the Bomb Shelter' (soon to be a movie at theaters near you)
How about: DEMOCRAT AGENDA
March 15, 2007 - 08:24 ET by old croHow about:
DEMOCRAT AGENDA
"The man who doesn't read good books has no advantage over the man who can't read them."
- Mark Twain
Since day 1
March 15, 2007 - 08:39 ET by pagarSince day 1 of the current Iraq War the headline has never changed.
Iraq-Democrats Demand OUR Surrender
Quagmire
March 15, 2007 - 08:57 ET by RJWell, three weeks in, the New York Times called the war a QUAGMIRE. It was the first of their many suggestions to the Democrats and the terrorists on how to fight the U.S.
Great, Great Point!
March 15, 2007 - 09:44 ET by TheBigMackDaddyThe AP is the master of this... Yahoo.com's headlines are primarily AP stories- I went there just a moment ago (knowing I would find a good example) and there it was, "Israel says it won't work with Palestinian government". You have to open the story up to see that the Hamas-lead government will still not renounce suicide bombings or recognize Irseal.
Bernard Lewis' book- Bias discusses, in great detail, how the left-wing media uses Headlines to lie to people. NYT headlines are a good example - CNN is the master of left-wing headline-style propiganda.
"Why don't we just ask Osama bin -- Osama Obama... Obama what -- since he won by such a big amount." -- Ted Kennedy
MackDaddy: thanks for prov
March 15, 2007 - 09:47 ET by Mark FinkelsteinMackDaddy: thanks for providing another excellent example of this MSM phenomenon.
I would have loved to have wi
March 15, 2007 - 11:06 ET by BeukeboomI would have loved to have witnessed the "shouting match" between Pelosi & Waters who both probably become completely unhinged during such moments.